SG-1/SGA Fic: Bickering (PG)

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Fandom: Stargate: SG-1/Stargate: Atlantis
Title: Bickering
Author: Em
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~210
Pairing: implied McKay/Sheppard, Jack/Daniel
Summary: "They kind of fight like us," Daniel says.
Dedication: for dragonbetween


Bickering

"McKay. At ease, Sheppard," Jack says, nodding curtly at the two-person welcoming committee. Jack places a hand on the small of Daniel's back and presses him forward.

There's sharp muttering behind them and then McKay stumbles forward, probably pushed. Daniel turns, one eyebrow raised to Jack.

"Would you like a tour?" McKay stiffly asks. "I'm sure I could provide something . . . adequate."

Daniel smiles. "I can just look. . . ." As they walk into the gate room, he looses his words.

"You're catching bugs," Jack deadpans.

Daniel snaps his mouth shut, pushing his glasses up his nose. "A tour sounds great."

McKay disapprovingly snorts and then sing-songs under his breath, "I'm not a tour guide."

Sheppard speaks out of the side of his mouth, "Just do it."

"You know I don't handle—"

"Will you just—"

Daniel wanders away, touching the banisters, the columns, anything he can reach. Jack barely restrains himself from snatching Daniel's hands lest he accidentally activate a self-destruct or something.

"They're pretty well organized," Jack off-handedly comments.

Daniel nods back the way they came. "They kind of fight like us," Daniel says.

Jack snorts as he opens a door with a wave of his hand. He leans into Daniel's space, speaking only for Daniel, "They're probably screwing, too."


~Comments and feedback are appreciated.

Comments

[dragonbetween.livejournal.com]

*squeals* That's perfect! Exactly what I wanted. *glomps you*

[theemdash]

I'm glad you approve.

I kept hearing Buffy say of the 2 Xanders, "They're kind of the same now."

[lejlkwiet.livejournal.com]

Heeee! *laughs at Jack fussing over Daniel* I wonder if Daniel managed to keep a straight face after Jack's last comment XD

[theemdash]

I wonder if Daniel managed to not snog him. ;)

Jack is always fussing after Daniel. It's what the man does.

[faithfulpuppy85.livejournal.com]

Thas cute. *snuggles Rodney*

[theemdash]

*snicker* He's so snugglable because he avoids snuggling.

[janedavitt.livejournal.com]

It's just impossible to hide it, huh? ;-) Nice one!

[theemdash]

Heh heh... dragonbetween requested that someone comment on how McKay and Sheppard fight like Jack and Daniel so it seemed like the obvious place to take it. ;)

Look I'm drabbling because I want to be just like janedavitt when I grow up! ;)

[paian]

Aw, so cute and so true. :-)

[theemdash]

Thanks. ;) Just a silly little fic.

[kyizi.livejournal.com]

Heh, great stuff. I can so see Jack worrying about Daniel accidentally setting off the self-destruct!

[theemdash]

Me too. That and Jack pushing Daniel around were the two things that felt truest to me.

[teddibear.livejournal.com]

*snerk* Oh so true and I don't even watch SGA. Hee!

[theemdash]

Heh heh... thanks! ;)

[green-grrl.livejournal.com]

My two OTPs in one! I so wish this was going to be a scene in SG:A season 3... :-)

[theemdash]

*snicker* It should be! ;)

[elven-wolf.livejournal.com]

*giggles* Cute!

[theemdash]

Thanks. ;)

[stellahobbit.livejournal.com]

It's amazing how you managed to get all their personalities down in so few words.

*needs an icon that shows the J/D and J/R love*

[theemdash]

It's amazing how you managed to get all their personalities down in so few words.

Thank you. What absolutely lovely feedback. That's especially nice to hear since I don't often write Sheppard and McKay.

[porntestpilot.livejournal.com]

*laughs and laughs* Yes, that is all true.

[theemdash]

*snort* I just love that so much of the McKay/Sheppard interaction is "off screen" in this one. It makes me giggle to imagine how they're fighting.

[vagablonde.livejournal.com]

HEEEEEE! That ending was so abrupt and entirely unexpected!! How Perfect!!!

[theemdash]

*snicker* Jack amuses me greatly.

[bloodygoodgirl.livejournal.com]

That was awesome. Because it's totally how it would happen with McKay and Sheppard 'quitely' fighting with one another and Jack immediately seeing the similarities. Silly flyboys and their scientists.

[theemdash]

I'm glad the situation rang true for you. And yes, silly flyboys (I won't say anything about the silliness of scientists because I fear a lecture).

[brandinsbabe.livejournal.com]

oh i love you. that was perfect. im always lookin for fics like this :D
xo

[theemdash]

I love you, too. ;)

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Cute. :D

[theemdash]

Thanks. ;)

[http://users.livejournal.com/_snookums/]

I loved that =D Jack/Daniel in Atlantis! And there's McKay and Sheppard, too!

[theemdash]

Glad you liked it. ;)

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Oh, that's so them. I can see that argument.

Icarus

[theemdash]

Heh. Thanks. You should know. ;)

[roadrunner1896.livejournal.com]

One of the serval reasons why I don't like McShep. They try to make them Jack/Daniel, but they just aren't.

[theemdash]

They aren't Jack/Daniel. They act like an old married couple, but Jack and Daniel are an old married couple.

Which is why I totally love them.

THING is hard to duplicate.

[forcryinoutloud.livejournal.com]

*snickers* Too cute. *g*

[theemdash]

Thank you! ;)

[chang-lee-ninja.livejournal.com]

I saw on your poll that people wanted to hear this one... shall I???

I lost all the other comments and emails ya had sent me on getting this started in the trash... so I thought I would start over and see what you wanted in any particular order??

And to clarify:
he looses his words. Loses, I think you mean?? Or Loosens??

[akiseo.livejournal.com]

Hehe!! I love it! Snippets like this are the best things evah!! Nice job, very cute!

[theemdash]

Thanks. This one amuses me greatly.