Firefly Fic: Christina (PG)

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Fandom: Firefly
Title: Christina
Author: Em
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~100
Characters: Jayne, Mal
Prompt: "proper motivation," from wiccanslyr's daily drabble prompts
Summary: Jayne falls in love. ♥
Dedication: for wiccanslyr


Christina

Jayne ran his hands over her cold skin, cataloguing her contours. Her mouth was pert and black, smooth like silk. He held her with one hand, feeling her power in her weight—a good ten pounds. He looked down her sight, his finger twitching on the trigger; he wiped his mouth with the back of his hand.

"Janye," Mal said, exasperated. "Quit fondlin' the liberated merchandise."

"I was just admirin'."

"Right." Mal shook his head. "Stop touching, and I'll let you keep one."

Jayne set the gun back in its straw packing and whispered, "See you in a bit, Christina."



~Feedback and comments are admired.

Comments

[lissangel.livejournal.com]

OMG! I love it. Clever!

[theemdash]

Hee. Thank you. I love writing Jayne. He's special. *pets Jayne*

[janedavitt.livejournal.com]

So full of the Jayne love right now...

[theemdash]

Everyone should be full of the Jayne love! :D

[gwenfrewi72.livejournal.com]

Ya know, I thought this was gonna be some cheesy fluff about Jayne falling in love with some girl and you can't imagine how relieved I was when it was another one of his 'girls' that he fell for. *snickers*

PERFECT JAYNE MOMENT!

[theemdash]

Thanks! Ha! Fluff. I promise I would never sink so low.

Besides, fluff would not be Jayne . . . unless you're talking about a *ahem* different kind of fluff. In which case the rating would be much higher.

[artemis-prime.livejournal.com]

That was lovely. So very Jayne and I like the name you chose for the gun. Goodness, though, ten pounds! She'd have quite the kick I would think :)

[theemdash]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Goodness, though, ten pounds! She'd have quite the kick I would think :)

I admit that I know nothing about guns, but when I googled "weight of assault rifle" I found an article about a lightweight assault rifle that weighs 6.4 pounds, so I figured non-lightweight might weigh around 10 pounds. The logic, she is at work.

[queende.livejournal.com]

SO!! AWESOME!!

[theemdash]

SO!! GRATEFUL!! ;)

[digopheliadug.livejournal.com]

Hehe, rock on, Jayne. Great fic!

[theemdash]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Christina

[rosehaft.livejournal.com]

This must be waht true love feels like. I LIKE IT! rose

Re: Christina

[theemdash]

I'm pretty sure it is. We can all only hope to find love that is so true. ;) Thanks for commenting!

[roadrunner1896.livejournal.com]

You did this prompt twice. Yeah, I am very observing, aren't I?

I prefer the Daniel one, but this is great, too. :D

*pets Jayne*

[theemdash]

I did some of them twice to hit multiple fandoms. I'm a whore like that.

(I like the Daniel one better, too.)