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Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Title: Bruised
Author: Em
Rating: R, for sex
Word Count: ~1130
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Prompt: 016. Purple (Big Damn Table)
Summary: Bruises are nothing compared to what will happen to us.
Notes: written for [livejournal.com profile] stargatefic100.
This is part of a series called Perfection in a Kiss. The stories can be read in any order and independently of each other.
Special thanks to [livejournal.com profile] fangirljen and [livejournal.com profile] janedavitt for betaing duties.

016. Purple
Bruised



Jack's fingers fit over the bruise on my left bicep. It's dark purple in the center, radiating to blue on the outer edges, roughly the shape of a boot heel. His knee bumps into an almost all black one on my leg, long and thin like a baton.

Black, purple, and blue dots my skin: badges of honor won on our mission to P4X-421. I survived my capture; Jack rescued me; the team hauled me across the universe and home. Superficial wounds, a little dehydration—this was one of the more relaxing incarcerations. After some fluids and a day in bed, Janet released me from the infirmary, warning me to take it easy, to be careful.

Jack isn't careful. He grips my flesh however he needs to, molding me to fit against him. I gasp against his pulling, part in pain and part in pleasure. I'm his clay.

"Did that hurt?" His voice is rough, like he's at the end of a cold, not quite well, but not sick either.

I shake my head, even though it had hurt.

He couldn't wait—I couldn't wait—to get out of the mountain, so he'd darted his eyes to a supply closet, and we'd met there twenty-five minutes later. Jack was already there when I walked in, sitting on the floor in the back, picking his cuticles, and biting his lip. We didn't say anything, he just grabbed me. He hasn't let go.

His fingers curl against the small of my back and he inhales sharply, breathing out shakily. On his knees, against the hard floor in the supply closet, Jack clutches my body to him—his hands say more than his mouth.

He unbuckles my belt and pulls open my BDUs. I reach to brace myself, my hand knocking over a roll of toilet paper as I clutch the metal supply shelf. The edge of the sharp shelf digs into my palm, leaving a dent that I'll press into my memory until it disappears—fading faster than the bruises will. I silence my gasp when his mouth fastens over my dick. My head hits the concrete wall inelegantly, hard enough to make me see stars, and I blink them away, concentrating on Jack's warm, wet mouth.

Jack's hands on my hips hold me like I belong to him, and right now I do.

I want to run my fingers through his short gray hair. It's soft on top, a little rough just at the nape of his neck. He cut it just a few days ago, peach fuzz behind his ears. I know how it feels only by sight—running my fingers through his hair is too domestic. I curl my fingers tighter against the supply shelf, feel the metal break skin, add a cut to the bruises that decorate my body.

His lips close around my penis like a kiss; his tongue presses against the vein. I gasp, the air stuck in my throat, burning in my lungs, desiring release by any means. I almost say his name when I come.

He leans back a moment later, licking his lips. I fall against the wall, uncurl my fingers, and slip to the ground. The palm of my left hand is red, a thin line from the metal shelves matching the path of my lifeline. Jack leans back, sitting on the floor, his hands behind him.

"You all right?" His voice is rough and quiet, just like the blow job. He wipes his mouth on the back of his hand. There's still a drop of come just under his lip.

I prod the cut in my hand, fresh blood pushing out of the slit. "I'm okay," I breathe. I wipe my hand on my black T-shirt and apply pressure.

His eyes shift away, looking to the underside of the supply shelves above our heads. He tilts his head, thinking. "I should probably get some staples."

I stifle my laugh. "Use yours up shooting them across your office?"

He smirks, eyes easily meeting mine, our normalcy reestablished with one well-placed joke.

I check my hand; the cut's nothing more than a tender line, a dull reminder of an orgasm in a supply closet and a need that lives deeper than skin.

"I was, you know, worried," he says seriously. He stands up and then helps me to my feet, grabbing both of my hands—gentle with the left hand—and hauling the majority of my weight. My joints protest, stiff despite the orgasm.

"About the staples?" I deflect the verbal intimacy. It's too raw for Jack: I know the limits of our relationship, just how hard to prod the porcelain shell of his masculinity. Bruises fade, cuts heal, but words can be scratched into the surface, engraving that compromises the integrity of a structure.

He grunts. "Yeah." His hands are working at my waist again, but this time he's buttoning me back together, dressing me. For some reason it doesn't seem condescending.

He steps back to assess me, his eyes quickly raking over my slouched form. He nods and then grabs a box of staples, shoves a ream of paper at me.

"Jack." As he turns back to me, I place the ream on a shelf and step close to him, too close. His intake of breath has more to do with fear than titillation. "You can't leave like that."

His eyes search my face, threat assessing, always. His free hand flexes by his side and I know he's already thinking of how to take me down without injuring me further. My dick actually twitches with the knowledge that he'd never intentionally hurt me.

I lick my lips as I slowly lean toward his face. We've never kissed; it's just not something we do. I don't know if it's too personal, or something we only do with women, but Jack and I don't kiss. Which is why I don't take it personally when he flinches. I grab his face between my hands, push him up against the door, and hear the box of staples drop. He freezes when my tongue touches his skin, licking up the drop of come that was still clinging to his lip.

His moan climbs inside my chest and lives in my blood.

His lips taste like both of us. I open my eyes and see it lying bare on Jack's face—somewhere down the road we're both going to shatter. Bruises are nothing compared to what will happen to us.

I swallow and step back, retrieve the ream of paper from the shelf, and quietly say over my shoulder, "You can leave like that."

The door opens and shuts, clanging loudly. When I turn around, the box of staples is still on the floor.


~Comments and feedback spawn more smut.

Date: 2006-05-20 01:38 pm (UTC)
sid: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sid
Oh, that was incredible! And painful! Ow!

Ow, I say!

Date: 2006-05-21 01:21 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel Heart)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Thanks! I'm not sure who's hurting more in this scene. Daniel has physical pain, but technically they both have emotional pain.

Date: 2006-05-20 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] craftypug.livejournal.com
Wow! Very powerful. Great story and well done. I could feel their need and their pain.

Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2006-05-21 01:22 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel Serious)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think their need outweighs their pain. ;)

Date: 2006-05-20 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stellahobbit.livejournal.com
I'm not sure what came directly before this, but I can see that there's a lot of potential backstory to this fic. Excellent!

Date: 2006-05-20 02:07 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
There isn't a fic that comes before this, but I have a lot going on in my head regarding their relationship at this time. There will be a companion piece to this later. And possibly one that bridges the two. Sort of. Oh, nebulous fic ideas... ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2006-05-20 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com
The easy banter right after the hotness just makes this deeply cool...!!

Date: 2006-05-21 01:23 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Thanks. These guys are all about the easy banter. That and awkward apologies. Oh, and the hot sex. ;)

Date: 2006-05-20 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com
This is such a visceral and painful and true depiction of them. Poor Jack. Doesn't he know from his reaction to incarcerated Daniel that it's too late? He's a goner. *loves*

Date: 2006-05-21 01:24 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel Serious)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Thank you. I'm glad the characterizations rang so true for you.

I think Jack knows he's a goner, but he's not going to admit it. Not yet any way. ;)

Woah

Date: 2006-05-20 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captainlogic.livejournal.com
Woah, cant wait to see a companion to that fic.Great job, love the imagery

Re: Woah

Date: 2006-05-21 01:27 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel Boyfriends)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Glad you enjoyed it.

The companion fic probably won't come for awhile (oh, "come," double entendre, not what I meant). But it will be written. I'm glad to see there's demand for it.

Date: 2006-05-20 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com
Very nice! Ah, walking the thin line.

Date: 2006-05-21 01:28 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel Heart)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
What other line do they walk? ;)

Glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2006-05-20 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
Wow, very nice. Poor boys. *hugs them*

Date: 2006-05-21 01:30 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Poor boys? They get hot sex! It can't be that bad. ;)

Date: 2006-05-21 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
True, but there is still mad angst, poor dears. And they can do better than sex in a storage closet (though it is hot as hell).

Date: 2006-05-21 04:16 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
We all know they get a happy ending. Erm... I think.

Date: 2006-06-05 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teddibear.livejournal.com
Ow, ow, OWWWWWWWWWWW! Oh man was that painful. I love Daniel's treatise on words and the whole NOT kissing thing. OMG. Just wow. And that line about what will happen to them. So true. Damn Em. Rip my heart out why don't you?

Nicely done. Ow. Off to read the rest of the new stuff I've missed. Oh and congrats on your noms. :) *smooch*

Date: 2006-06-05 12:59 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel Heart)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Damn Em. Rip my heart out why don't you?

*brushes it off and hands it back* Sorry about that. ;)

I love Daniel's treatise on words and the whole NOT kissing thing.

Having them not kiss is one of my kinks and it's because I want them to kiss. I love it when they act like such guys, trying to convince themselves that there isn't emotion, or denying the fact that there is, or being unable to say that there is.

Oh and congrats on your noms.

Thanks! I'm eager to see how it turns out.

Date: 2006-10-17 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teddibear.livejournal.com
LOL oh so you give me back a bruised and broken heart, I see how it is. *g*

Oh I agree. I love it when they're men and try to do everything NOT to do anything. *snerk* Dumb boys. But I also love it when they kiss cuz it's hot and passionate and strong and *guh*

Did the results come in yet?

*hugs*

Date: 2007-04-12 12:23 pm (UTC)
ext_33206: (Jack)
From: [identity profile] roadrunner1896.livejournal.com
Not sure if I should actually comment or feedback. Can you take more smut babies in your brain? What about all the other work that needs to be finished?

Ah, well, I just risk it. ;)

This was again a really nice fic. I could almost feel his pain and pleasure. And so typically Daniel. Having to have the last word. Jack deserves some snuggles. *snuggles him*

Date: 2007-04-12 02:20 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel Butt)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
I have plenty of smut babies in my brain. I like them there.

What Jack really needs is a second time in the storage closet. ;)

Date: 2007-04-12 02:35 pm (UTC)
ext_33206: (Jack)
From: [identity profile] roadrunner1896.livejournal.com
I like your smut more when you put it into fics for me to read.

Jack really needs to realize that he is in love with Daniel and kiss him already.

Date: 2008-04-29 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roaringmice.livejournal.com
That was excellent. I especially liked that ending. Daniel was quite bold, there. Good for him.

Date: 2008-04-30 12:52 am (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Thank you. I like the ending, too. I love Daniel being bold and really taking charge after Jack had pushed him around so much; a clever reminder that they're equals.

Date: 2008-04-30 11:50 am (UTC)
ext_2043: (obvious)
From: [identity profile] zats-clear.livejournal.com
I school my voice silent when his mouth fastens over my dick.

fantastic line

and the "can't leave like that" action? so much hotter than if they had actually kissed.

thanks for giving me the reason to read this again!!!! I may not need caffeine to wake up now LOL

Date: 2008-05-03 01:28 am (UTC)
theemdash: (Daniel Guh)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Thank you! I loved that, too, waaay hot.

And yeah, I'm amused by how many people have come over to read this. *snickers*
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Date: 2008-05-03 01:30 am (UTC)
theemdash: (Daniel Sex Please)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
bad reader; no porn for you.

I'd feel better if there was porn for me. ;)

I love angsty sex and I'm glad you like it, too! I love the end—the lick, guh. Y'know, the plagiarism thing gave me an excuse to fall in love with this story again, too. ;)

Date: 2008-05-01 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] getaway-machine.livejournal.com
Pfft. Who would plagarize this, anyway? ;)

Not!kissing is almost as hot as angry!kissing. For the record. I so love them both a lot.

Date: 2008-05-03 01:33 am (UTC)
theemdash: (Daniel Guh)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
I so love them too. And I don't know why anyone would plagiarize this either.

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