TMNT Fic: Annoyingly Perfect (PG)

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Fandom: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
Title: Annoyingly Perfect
Author: Em
Rating: PG for violence
Word Count: 100
Characters: Leo, Karai, Raph (I couldn't help it!)
Summary: Karai has perfect form and Leo can't help but notice.
Dedication: for lindentreeisle
Notes: Oh, TMNT, it has been so long. . . . Seriously, folks, this is like coming home.


Annoyingly Perfect

She has perfect form; I can't help stopping, staring, watching when I should be fighting, protecting . . . but I forget that—because she's perfect. Karai ducks a nunchuck and her hair shines silver in the light, blinding. Her muscles in her legs tighten—tense and release—when she kicks out.

Mikey takes the hit on the chin and somehow turns it into a flip, landing shakily on his feet.

"Leo!" Raph growls. "Quit watchin' your girlfriend."

I snarl while messily disarming one of the Foot.

Karai turns, sneering beautifully, and throws herself into a flawless roundhouse.

She is so annoyingly perfect.

~Comments and feedback are pizza.

Comments

[morningstar4.livejournal.com]

Hee hee...you said it was short, so I came to read. :) Very nice. I love Raphael's jab, and I can TOTALLY see Leo staring at Karai like that.

[theemdash]

I can TOTALLY see Leo staring at Karai like that.

Well, yeah. That's because he looooooooooooves her. *snort*

I love Raphael's jab

Oh, Raph, I just can't make him shut it.

[morningstar4.livejournal.com]

But that's what we love about Raph! (and about you) ;)

[theemdash]

Awwwww.... you love that I can't shut it either? ;)

[morningstar4.livejournal.com]

LOL! Well maybe a little bit of that too. ;)

[lindentreeisle.livejournal.com]

Happy gleefulness! You should write more TMNT stuff. *sagenod*

(You can try tmnt maybe? But I don't know if they'll appreciate it. ;)

[theemdash]

I think some people will if I identify myself. ;)

I promise to try to write some more TMNT for you guys. I owe you for Saiyuki.

[theemdash]

I thought we were bitches? :D

You are bitches! But I love you despite that. ;)

*ahem* I'm just going to screen that comment... ;) But I understand.

[doppleganger55.livejournal.com]

Very good, you capture the tension between those two quite well.

[theemdash]

Thanks. It's nice to come home to TMNT.

[mistressrenet.livejournal.com]

Oh, that's beautiful.

[theemdash]

*snort* And cliche, I think.

I promise that I have both TMNT and Saiyuki fic simmering at the back of my brain. Mostly because of you three. ;)

[o0satsuki0o.livejournal.com]

Perfect...ly sexy~. Who wouldn't stop and stare at Karai? XD;

Got any more of those lying around?-->is a Leo/Karai fan

[theemdash]

I don't have any other Leo/Karai fics, sadly. And I really need to revise my old TMNT fic and post it here. (Stuff that I wrote 8 years ago is unfit to be placed next to my newer writing.)

Thanks for reading/commenting, though! It's nice to know someone is reading. It might actually encourage me to write some new TMNT fic.

[roadrunner1896.livejournal.com]

Yesterday I saw the German trailer for the movie. It looks good. I might even go watch it.

[theemdash]

You should! Love TMNT. &hearts

[roadrunner1896.livejournal.com]

I will. I need to find out who wins. Raph or Leo. ;)

I also watched the other three movies and they must have been far worse. I also haven't been to the movies in way too long. And now I almost have time to do so again. :D

[theemdash]

Yes, the time made the dialogue get cheesy. :P

TMNT is a great movie, too. It made me so happy.

[micaturtle.livejournal.com]

I love it! XD Leo *SO* would be watching her! ;D