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Fandom: Harry Potter
Title: Uncertain Blindness
Author: Em
Rating: R for sex
Word Count: ~800
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Summary: Hurried steps into the dorm, desperate sex against a wardrobe, they can have whatever they want.
Notes: Special thanks to [livejournal.com profile] momebie for the giving a quick beta.
This is for [livejournal.com profile] batmanboxers who left for a movie wanting to return to some Remus porn and for [livejournal.com profile] sopdetly because I wanted to write something for her today.
Recced: Editor's Choice at [livejournal.com profile] sirius_news


Uncertain Blindness


They'd barely made it into the dorm room when Sirius pushed him up against the nearest vertical surface (which happened to be James's wardrobe). Lips fixed to Remus's neck and he could only tilt his head back and moan, a blush rising on his cheeks when he realized how wanton and desperate he sounded.

"Sirius. Sirius. You didn't even check the room." His hands were working on Sirius's buttons despite his protests.

"Would've yelled at us by now," was Sirius's breathless response. His lips were back on Remus's throat immediately and if he mumbled anything else it was lost in Remus's skin.

Remus's fingers moved more quickly now, finding the buttons and loosing them, working their way down Sirius's school shirt. They'd only done this a few times, the first time after a heated stare and the shared realization that if they asked, they could have what they wanted. Still, his hands were becoming familiar with Sirius's skin, his tongue craving Sirius's taste.

Sirius's own fingers were separating Remus's carefully tucked in shirt from his trousers, brushing hungrily over skin. His hands stroked Remus's back from waist to shoulder, rucking up Remus's shirt as they went.

"Sirius." He wanted to say more—something about Sirius moving so he could strip away that finally unbuttoned shirt, ask if they could perhaps move somewhere more comfortable and less desperate—but all his thoughts were lost as he touched Sirius, tracing over muscles before his hands pulled Sirius closer and he tilted his head, catching Sirius's lips in a hard kiss.

Sirius pushed back, his hips hitching forward, sending a jolt through Remus's spine, and then Sirius was pressing against him, pressing Remus up against James's wardrobe, rutting against him in a way that made all the syllables bleed out of Remus's brain, running on the floor like spilled pumpkin juice.

Sirius's mouth parted in a grin, his lips only half touching Remus's now. His left hand moved round to work on Remus's flies, opening them with a quick flick and a brush of magic. Thankfully he took care of his own flies as well since Remus's hands were too busy tangling in Sirius's hair, stroking over his throat, holding him so he wouldn't pull away.

Sirius, of course, wasn't wearing pants ("I couldn't find clean ones," he'd say with a smirk later, but Remus knew it was just because he'd planned for something like this), but he pushed down Remus's clothes and then moved in again, fitting their dicks into the hollow of hip bones, lining them so that they'd have an easy slide, making it so that they wouldn't even have to move to the bed if they didn't want to.

Which was a good thing since Remus didn't have time for the bed.

He drank in Sirius, sucking on his tongue, biting his lip, kissing him hard and desperate while Sirius fucked against him. It was an acceptable arrangement, Remus considered, while Sirius saw to their cocks, Remus saw to their lips and the combination of the two satisfied their shared desperation.

"Moony," Sirius gasped a few beats before he shut his eyes and came, his breath hot and fast over Remus's lips.

Remus kissed his throat, licking up behind his ear, feeling the come hit his belly, slide over his cock, and he rutted against Sirius, keeping his pace steady while Sirius stuttered, his body and mind lost in an orgasm.

A moment later and Remus joined Sirius in incoherency, the warm feeling rushing over his legs and up his spine, his nerves tingling until they whited out like a lumos in a hidden passageway—like one uncertain moment of blindness before the comforting glow settled in.

Sirius kissed him, his mouth sloppy, his lips soft and spent. "So good, so good," he murmured. He licked his own lips, catching Remus's mouth as well, the flick of a tongue sending an aftershock through Remus's system.

He chuckled, the sudden nervous chuckle of one who realized he'd lost his head. "Didn't quite make it to the bed, then."

"Maybe another time." Sirius's smile was lazy and slow, unlike the sharp grin he used in front of Peter and James. He kissed Remus again and Remus's heart fluttered now that his dick wasn't hogging all of the blood.

"I suppose . . . suppose we should straighten ourselves." Remus tried to make himself stand straighter but his legs didn't move.

"Just a bit longer like this, Moony." Sirius tucked his head into Remus's throat, his breath lightly tickling Remus's skin. His arms were relaxed, his hands cradled around Remus's shoulders, wrapping Remus is a sleepy embrace.

"We can stay like this as long as you want," Remus whispered. He held Sirius loosely, his hand absently stroking Sirius's back as he thought, if you ask, we can stay like this forever.


~Comments and feedback are asked for.

Date: 2009-07-25 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] starkdependant
rutting against him in a way that made all the syllables bleed out of Remus's brain, running on the floor like spilled pumpkin juice gnuh, just gnuh. GOD YES.

This is exactly what I needed to lift my spirits, you are brilliant. YOU SHOULD ALWAYS WRITE ME PORN WHEN I GO TO THE CINEMA.

Date: 2009-07-25 11:55 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Padfoot)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
I SUSPECT THAT IF I DID THAT, YOU WOULD GO BROKE GOING TO THE CINEMA. XD

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Date: 2009-07-26 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sopdetly.livejournal.com
Um. Hot? Yes. Hot.

until they whited out like a lumos in a hidden passageway—like one uncertain moment of blindness before the comforting glow settled in

I LOVE THAT. What a fantastic description.

And of course, the last line makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. ♥

Lovely surprise, dear. Thank you. ♥ ♥

Date: 2009-07-26 01:19 am (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Remus/Sirius Kisses)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Yay for hot! :D

I'm glad you love that description. I love that description but it's one of those lines that made me wonder if maybe it was just me. ;)

(That line is totally for you. I almost went more angsty and then I was like, "No, this is for [livejournal.com profile] sopdetly, too and must be HAPPY." ♥)

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Date: 2009-07-26 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dogsunderfoot.livejournal.com
I think batmanboxers needs to go to the movies more often if you're going to write pieces like this! I'll supply popcorn money! :)

"It was an acceptable arrangement, Remus considered, while Sirius saw to their cocks, Remus saw to their lips and the combination of the two satisfied their shared desperation." It's good to know your part in a relationship...

NICE!!!!

Date: 2009-07-26 01:23 am (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Padfoot)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
LOL. I'm envisioning this mass undertaking to raise money to send [livejournal.com profile] batmanboxers to the movies in exchange for me writing porn. ;)

Glad you enjoyed it. It's been a long time since I've actually sat down to write fic for these two.

Date: 2009-07-26 12:09 am (UTC)
ext_21803: (Remus/Sirius: Kiss me - temptation)
From: [identity profile] madam-minnie.livejournal.com
Ooh frantic, vertical sex against sturdy furniture sex FTW!

A moment later and Remus joined Sirius in incoherency, the warm feeling rushing over his legs and up his spine, his nerves tingling until they whited out like a lumos in a hidden passageway—like one uncertain moment of blindness before the comforting glow settled in.


Perfection!

Date: 2009-07-26 01:26 am (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Remus/Sirius 2)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
VERTICAL SEX! FTW!

I so want to write a series of threesomes with Remus/Sirius/James's furniture.

(I really should get off my ass and submit my stuff to TQP.)

Date: 2009-07-26 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] great-stoneface.livejournal.com
OH HI THERE! I know you!

This is the first R/S fic I have read in months (just can't get into it anymore, dammit. Blame Star Trek), and I have to say it's a great fic to break me back into things, because it is A) really well written and B) porny. Yay!

Date: 2009-07-26 01:32 am (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Idiots)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
I KNOW YOU, TOO.

This is the first R/S fic I've written in over a year. I've been RPing as Sirius with [livejournal.com profile] sopdetly and been on the verge of actually writing something for awhile, but then I read Stealing Harry for the first time and I suddenly remembered everything I love about fanfic and wanted to contribute again. This was all a matter of the stars aligning. ;)

Glad you enjoyed it and it broke you back in!

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Date: 2009-07-26 12:23 am (UTC)
ext_289215: (PATD Ryan/Brendon YEAH!)
From: [identity profile] momebie.livejournal.com
RUTTING. \o/

Date: 2009-07-26 01:18 am (UTC)
theemdash: (Daniel Sex Please)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
RUTTING!! \o/

Date: 2009-07-26 02:47 am (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Arthur)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Thank you, dear. Look, I wrote something that wasn't 4 million words long! I'd forgotten what that was like.

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Date: 2009-07-26 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spacefragments.livejournal.com
oh my. this is wonderfully, amazingly hot. especially how both of them were so eager for it that they didn't even make it to the bed. guuuuhh.

Date: 2009-07-26 10:31 am (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Remus/Sirius Kisses)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Whenever they're both willing, they are totally sizzling. ;) Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2009-07-26 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyannikaa.livejournal.com
Wheww...drool!

Date: 2009-07-26 10:32 am (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Arthur)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
;)

Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2009-07-26 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] littlemissgg.livejournal.com
Om nom nom - this is delicious!

Date: 2009-07-26 10:32 am (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Padfoot)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Nummy, yes. Remus would like to stay and continue eating Sirius for awhile.

Date: 2009-07-26 10:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akasha-lilian.livejournal.com
Guh! Yay for porn!!!

Both lines were quoted, but the pumpkin juice and lumos references were great!!! =)

Date: 2009-07-26 05:06 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Marauders)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Porn! \o/

I'm so glad both of those lines were such a hit! ;)

Date: 2009-07-26 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brighty18.livejournal.com
OMG!!! That is incredibly hot and really rather poetic. I especially loved:

Sirius pushed back, his hips hitching forward, sending a jolt through Remus's spine, and then Sirius was pressing against him, pressing Remus up against James's wardrobe, rutting against him in a way that made all the syllables bleed out of Remus's brain, running on the floor like spilled pumpkin juice.

and

Sirius's smile was lazy and slow, unlike the sharp grin he used in front of Peter and James. He kissed Remus again and Remus's heart fluttered now that his dick wasn't hogging all of the blood.

Oh, and frotting is wicked hot.

Date: 2009-07-26 05:07 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Remus/Sirius 2)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love the description of Sirius's smile and that he has different smiles for Remus and everyone else. ♥

Date: 2009-07-26 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] werewolfsfan.livejournal.com
I adore how desperate they are here. Desperate, and young and oh so hot!

Date: 2009-07-26 06:11 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Remus/Sirius Kisses)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
I'm a fan of desperate, hot, and young. (Young "carefree," not young "having few years in age.")

Date: 2009-07-26 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duck-or-rabbit.livejournal.com
Lovely fic, Editor's Choice @ [profile] sirius_news.

Date: 2009-07-26 08:41 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Remus/Sirius Kisses)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Many thanks! Glad you enjoyed it enough to highlight it so.

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Date: 2009-07-26 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] an-fhanai.livejournal.com
Ye gads. I think a fund ought to be set up to send [livejournal.com profile] batmanboxers to the movies ALL the time.

Date: 2009-07-27 12:14 am (UTC)
theemdash: (SBP Sirius's Manhood)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
*snickers* I love how many people have been suggesting this.

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Date: 2009-07-27 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cackling-madly.livejournal.com
I'm so glad [livejournal.com profile] duck_or_rabbit recced this, or else I would have missed it completely! So hot and beautifully written ♥

Date: 2009-07-27 10:10 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Padfoot)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
Many thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2009-11-29 02:20 pm (UTC)
ext_33206: (Default)
From: [identity profile] roadrunner1896.livejournal.com
How are they so hot?

Also see? About 800 words, but another mark on my "fanfics read" list. I am totally cheating my way up to 100 fics this year. ;)
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Date: 2011-10-04 10:58 am (UTC)
theemdash: (HP Padfoot)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
I love sex against vertical surfaces. (So does Sirius.)

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